Post by CLOVER on Sept 24, 2015 11:34:33 GMT
[attr="class","ur_thread_title"]PENDING
[attr="class","ur_thread_subtitle"]Just a few minor edits
[attr="class","ur_thread_cont"]The app looks great! (but I just have a few notes cx)
- "Ragged, old envelope that blows in the night winds of Gaea" Is a tiny bit vague, where exactly in Gaea does it blows? And what happens if it rains, does the envelope get wet and lost forever, or...?
- "Shades can corrupt the dream by creating more malicious spirits." How exactly, do you create a malicious spirit?
Just these 2 points~! Post in the Notification thread when they're fixed and I'll approve it <3
- "Ragged, old envelope that blows in the night winds of Gaea" Is a tiny bit vague, where exactly in Gaea does it blows? And what happens if it rains, does the envelope get wet and lost forever, or...?
- "Shades can corrupt the dream by creating more malicious spirits." How exactly, do you create a malicious spirit?
Just these 2 points~! Post in the Notification thread when they're fixed and I'll approve it <3
